:). Good one. But one request. I know Hindi but am not too fluent in it. So could you please provide a translator so that 'Hindi' challenged people like me will find it easier.
These lines are too good.Wordings are too good. Try using these lines in a poem or convert this into poem. I really liked the words u have used here, they sound very phonetic.
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wow!! superb rumy!! too good!! impressed!!
Hum ye to nahi bata sakte, wo kaise badal gaye,
Hum ye to nahi bata sakte, wo kaise badal gaye,
Bas itna kahenge, good change :)
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"Do Shabd" is beautiful ... selection of words, timing, depth ... all perfect !!!
:). Good one. But one request. I know Hindi but am not too fluent in it. So could you please provide a translator so that 'Hindi' challenged people like me will find it easier.
Hmm..heavy stuff! Good! hope you don't write after getting tally!
Ruma,
These lines are too good.Wordings are too good. Try using these lines in a poem or convert this into poem. I really liked the words u have used here, they sound very phonetic.
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